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Day 1

I'm going to try to do this.....have mercy....I am just starting....

sweet spring ride in morn
terse transition breaks, later
smiles and laughter swarm

Gods of Olympus, I hope I got that right. Can you use a comma?

LOVE "terse transition"!!
I think you can do whatever you want to do, honestly.
Usually each line is its own complete thought, but sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do :)
Thanks for jumping in!


Yes, I figured that the comma was a little questionable.....I'll be a Haiku Ninja by the time I finish April...thanks for the inspiration.

thankful for my friends
sixty on the metronome
timing of my heart

I sense a theme to your poems, Patches :)

I have great memories of writing haiku in high school!
I'll jump in with a very basic starter too - why not?

I hear my son laugh
Downstairs with the nanny
Working sometimes stinks



Loved this line, "I am my yard's fool." ---- Aren't we all.

Weeding was my April Fool's trick this year!

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