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National Poetry Month -- Haiku 16
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Haiku 16



all day rain threatens
the clouds loom, dark and weighty
moths want to come in


-- Liz Garton Scanlon
    4/16/2009

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Tanita Says :)

(Anonymous)
I love this -- this is EXACTLY what's going on in my world today.

Very nice. Terrific last line! The moths hover outside my screen all time, hoping to make a break for it inside.

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